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15 December 2006 @ 09:01 pm
FIC (drabble): Ghost Kiss (for challenge #5: Suzie Costello)  

Title: Ghost Kiss
Author: fajrdrako
Characters: Gwen, Rhys, Suzie
For tw100 Challenge #5: Suzie Costello
Rating: PG
Spoilers: for Everything Changes and They Keep Killing...

Ghost Kiss

Gwen woke, confused. She was in bed, Rhys asleep beside her. She felt the pressure of lips leaving hers, awakening her with a ghostly kiss. Whose?

Weightless, the image sat on the edge of the bed, glowing, coming into focus. Suzie Costello. Gwen felt no fear of a phantom, and Suzie's sad, beautiful eyes were not angry.

"I loved you," said Suzie.

"You bloody well tried to kill me! Twice!"

"You belong with me. Not them."

"Get out of here!" Gwen hissed. Suzie began to fade.

Rhys rolled over, half-waking. "Huh?" he mumbled. "Someone there?"

"Nobody at all," said Gwen.

sadbhyl on December 16th, 2006 03:17 am (UTC)
Okay, that's just creepy and disturbing. and I mean that in a good way.
fajrdrakofajrdrako on December 16th, 2006 03:18 am (UTC)
Thank you! Greatly appreciated.
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fajrdrakofajrdrako on December 16th, 2006 03:48 am (UTC)
I'm so glad! thanks for commenting.
ScapeBabe: vmars80'scloser2myself on December 16th, 2006 04:09 am (UTC)
I don't know that I see Suzie loving Gwen. She had so much resentment from being 'replaced'.
fajrdrakofajrdrako on December 16th, 2006 04:19 am (UTC)
So she did; but she did kiss her on the quay. I think Suzie was very mixed up.
truebq: sexin noobtruebq on December 16th, 2006 01:07 pm (UTC)
Wonderfully done, and brilliantly creepy.
fajrdrakofajrdrako on December 16th, 2006 01:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
fififollefififolle on December 16th, 2006 10:59 pm (UTC)
Woah. Creepy. Nice one. She was so freaky, really. Trust her to haunt Gwen :D Well done.
fajrdrakofajrdrako on December 18th, 2006 12:25 pm (UTC)
Yes, Suzie was odd in life back when she was sane; odder still under the effects of the glove; and then downright bizarre after death. Glad you enjoyed it!