She of the Unpronounceable Name ([info]aibhinn) wrote in [info]tw100,

Penance (Homeless)

Title: Penance
Author: [info]aibhinn
Characters: Jack
Rating: G
Challenge: Homeless
Notes: Vague spoilers for Children of Earth. Been a loooooong time since I've written any drabbles, let alone for a comm... anything I need to fix in the formatting/header, let me know!


Jack hoisted a bale of hay and hefted it onto the truck, then wiped his forehead with his wrist. The hayfields of Epsilon 23 stretched into the distance, rectangular bales set at uniform spaces as far as he could see. Three hours until sundown, then a meal in the barracks and straight to sleep, only to get up at dawn to do it again. In two weeks, he'd shoulder his knapsack and sign on with a transport, off to find another planet.

Homelessness: his penance for those who'd never again need a home.

Jack stepped forward to the next bale.
Tags: challenge: homeless, character: jack harkness

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[info]rustydog

August 3 2010, 04:37:59 UTC 1 year ago

Wow, I've tossed a few square bales in my life, but I never imagined someone doing it on another planet. :) This works really well. Nice job. And fast!

[info]aibhinn

August 3 2010, 04:42:21 UTC 1 year ago

Oh, thanks! *blush* I was thinking of what sorts of jobs he might do, and it seemed to me that heavy labor would be right about where his mindset is, particularly right afterwards, so field labor it was. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed!

[info]karaokegal

August 3 2010, 05:22:46 UTC 1 year ago

Nice. Good angsty Jack.

[info]jo02

August 3 2010, 23:41:52 UTC 1 year ago


Sad and beautiful!

[info]jooles34

August 4 2010, 11:05:27 UTC 1 year ago

Lovely drabble. I really like the idea that Jack would be doing something like that, and being restless, moving from place to place. Sad, but morbidly so. Coping. Nicely done.

[info]hab318princess

August 4 2010, 16:27:08 UTC 1 year ago

sounds spot on for how he would feel

great drabble
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